May 282011
 

My six sentences this week are from a short story I wrote a short while ago. Once it’s polished, I will post it here under stories. Enjoy and feel free to comment!

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His kiss was incredible and it sent little tingling shivers all the way through her body. A kiss wasn’t supposed to be that amazing; it was just a kiss!

For a moment she almost pulled away. This was too good, too dangerous. They shouldn’t be doing it. It could lead… it could lead to a place from which they would never return.

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  14 Responses to “Six Sentence Sunday #2”

  1. As one of my heros once said, “No kiss is ever ‘just a kiss.’” And your hero has just proved that it seems. Nice six!

  2. Awesome six! Love it!

  3. Yes, but maybe they don’t want to return!

  4. Oh, they’ll return but what a great trip they’ll have first with a kiss like that

  5. I love short stories and can’t wait to read the whole thing.

  6. What a kiss! The dangerous kind is always the best.

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